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*Edit: Since this didn't even make the top fifteen as a finalist, I suppose it can stay up. The hell with you two, greeting card scholarship. Next time I will only do a five minute scribble, since that seems to be what you like to pick to win. >:C*

Originally I was not going to post the final version of this, but since the scholarship contest has officially closed and I don't find out results until mid March, I decided the hell with it. If it wins and they have a problem with it, then I'll remove it then. But I'm pretty proud of it, so I share. =P

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A huge shoutout to *Kutanra, ~StupidFae, ~Amontadillo, ~IvanHattori, and *BronzeHalo for the features and critiques! Unfortunately I did not have time to fix everything mentioned, but I did try to make the nostrils a little deeper, fix the eyes, and fluff up the wreath (even though now I see the fluff on the left layer must have accidentally been hidden). If this doesn't win, I will probably go back and fix everything that was mentioned, just because it will help improve for the next piece. You guys are awesome, and thank you so much for helping to make this piece better! :hug:

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And, most importantly, a huge thank you to ~mwilliams-stock for letting me use one of her photographs as a reference for this beautiful horse! This is probably only my second or third attempt at a Clydesdale, and he gorgeous horse was absolutely perfect. :heart:
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Thanks so much! :hug:

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DO NOT copy, reproduce, distribute, transmit, broadcast, display, sell, license, heavily reference, trace, claim, reuse, or otherwise exploit for any other purpose whatsoever without prior written consent of the respective owner. All rights are reserved and they are reserved to ME! DO NOT "SHARE" my work! This is for a scholarship competition and is not intended for use other than that. And that includes Howrse coats dammit. :|
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

The detailing on the legs and the body is AMAZING! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt=":la:" title="La la la la"/>

However, the muzzle looks... off... kinda twisted in a way. the nose looks front on, but the head is looking to the left.

the forelock looks slightly off.. perhaps eliminating the right side partially would make it look better?

The background is simply Amazing O.O but the sky looks.. empty. I needs some clouds and perhaps a few less stars on the bottom and around the moon.

the moon could use a bit of texture as well <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> but otherwise, its a fabulous piece <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> I really enjoy staring at it <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="21" alt=":lmao:" title="Laughing my ass off!"/>